#1
more than likely punchy metal song.

and im stuck i need a bit of constructive input

(spoken)In the final days; close to the end
I will be unleashed.

(swell)

My fur dark as night
Mane and tail made of flame
Dark eyes breed of hate
Hoof clod thunder

(tempo change)

I ride out from the seventh seal
where I run storm clouds follow
where I sleep war breaks loose
one of the four so I ride

(instrumental brief)

on my back death rides
In my shadow ground quakes
See my eyes Peirce your soul.
Ride on to the end
#2
Im not really shure about this. It kind of confuses me perhaps if i heard it with the music i could get it.