Made the lyrics in the S+L forum and finally got around to putting music to them I think this actually came out quite nice. At points I think it gets really "poppish" but I guess it's opinion. There are some nice sounding counter parts in this too. I hope you enjoy it.
i think this song would sound really awesome if you sang an octave higher and really belted it out.
An octave higher huh? Hmmm my voice really can't go that high and sustain there :P Thanks for the comment though.