#2
type as i listen

ahh gotta love midi cellos (or wat it sounds like on my laptop speakers)

the build up so far is pretty cool, im excited to see where it goes

kinda of repeats a bunch, actually it repeats alot

i dont hear any variation, where were you trying to go with this one??

i now hear the variation, but when it came in it seemed off at the beginning.

still repeats a bit, but it has a cool video game music feel to it.

overall it didnt really go anywhere and just seemed to repeat the "main theme" over and over. expand on it or throw some melodys on top to make it more interesting.

cfc? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=11512335#post11512335
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#3
there seems to be a fad going on with synth strings.
I would change the intro up a little bit
Piano is a nice touch
i like the string build up
the strings i think should sync up with the piano
Overall good job!

c4c? http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=714417
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