#1
first song
Crit please


your heart goes up in flames
it's trying to escape
but it cant get free
from behind those steel Bars

you say youv'e changed
you say your not the same
but it's plain to see
your running from the past
but you know thers no differnce
between then and now
between then
between then
between then and now

your heart goes up in flames
it's trying to escape
but it cant get free
from behind those steel bars


looking like that
talking like that
acting like that
you can see
why they look at you like that
dressing like that
walikng like that
listning to that
why they look at you like that

your heart goes up in flames
it's trying to escape
but it cant get free
from behind those steel bars

From behind
From behind
From behind
those steel bars
Last edited by acustic 666 at Nov 17, 2007,
#2
well gotta say, for a first song buts pretty dam awesome.


"between then and now
between then
between then
between then and now" this part didn't really do it for me. but the rest i enjoyed, good job.