i entered the slash contest with a solo and wondering what you guys think. here it is http://guitarboy354.musicnation.com/nightmare i called it nightmare i couldn't think of a good name since i didn't write it about anything
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well honestly it needs work, there is a bunch or weird stops and pauses and it doesn't seem to flow.
Lets just say you won't win the contest with that.
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damnit Ironbodom.

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Yes, someone "was ate jam" while they were playing.
Brilliant observation.

Completely changes at 0:46, personally i got sick of the vibrato (or w/e its called in the beginning (0:00-0:35)
its pretty good, try adding some drum patterns and just because people criticize your work doesnt mean its bad, it just makes you better. Good luck anyways!