i entered the slash contest with a solo and wondering what you guys think. here it is http://guitarboy354.musicnation.com/nightmare i called it nightmare i couldn't think of a good name since i didn't write it about anything
well honestly it needs work, there is a bunch or weird stops and pauses and it doesn't seem to flow.
sounds like an avenged sevenfold song
Lets just say you won't win the contest with that.
Completely changes at 0:46, personally i got sick of the vibrato (or w/e its called in the beginning (0:00-0:35)
its pretty good, try adding some drum patterns and just because people criticize your work doesnt mean its bad, it just makes you better. Good luck anyways!