I'm doing English and there's an option for doing a Creative Writing Folio, which requires the pupil to show their ability at two seperate kinds of creative writing, choices being Self-Reflective Essays, Drama, Poetry and Prose. I'm doing Poetry as one (probably). The poems have to be interconnected in some way, so I thought I'd do some poems on my friends *insert giant "awwww"*, but am worried that the examiners will not "get" the poems as they do not know the subjects.

So, in order to test this theory, I will post one of the possibilities for entrants to the shortlist of possible folio pieces here, and see if my paranoid mind has been screwing with me, or guiding me.

Here's one


Tatooed sarcasm
Spat out and rifled towards
The pleb underlings.

Biting cleanly through
Pretence and lies and facade
To the honest shame.

Armour is hollow.
Mother, Father and Sister:
Open books to him.

Ok, crit away!!! And it's in haiku verse form, so I'm not really worried about flow, more about emphasis from quasi-enjambement.

And apologies for the last thread
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I only do that on MSN, and I get many complaints about it.

F&F will have cyber sex with you on MSN. He's a bit handsy though.

I have become..... METACARPI!!!!

I wish