ok, this is my first attempt. the idea was to create some dimmu borgir style song. keyboards are still missing, my friend's taking care of em, and i haven't still understood how drums work in guitar pro xD
anyways, it sounds repetitive because it should
i've included the lyrics, if someone wants to check it out.
please, be objective, constructive critics are welcome

EDIT: i've changed the chorus, it should be in key now.
Last edited by Adhrast at Nov 19, 2007,
i think you mean the chorus is the one thing off key, mh..
anyway, thanks for the tips. any suggestions for the breakdown/solo and for making everything better?
updated, i've changed something. it should be better now.
still missing keys and drums though...