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This weekend I had a project in continuity for my TV production class. The assignment was to convey a brief story without dialogue. I want to show it to people, but none of my friends are around. So here it is, UG. Hope you like.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QhpzeZ-wpBc
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That was sweet man

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I thought it was cool how the flashbacks were done in drawings.
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#10
dude, that was way good
only thing to look at is in the begging, we can see the camera man's shadow when the white kid comes around the corner...

other than that, i liked it a lot
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That was awesome, loved it.
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Doesn't it kind of defeat the purpose of "no dialogue" to have the flashback scene with writing?
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that was pretty good. you could use something like Shake (the software program) or a camcorder with a couple forms of image stabilization to get better quality, but it was pretty well edited. I liked it.
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I liked it a lot. Good reversal at the end. There was a bit too much lens flare, especially when walking down the street in the beginning. And some of the backlighting made it hard to see faces, especially the last scene. But other than that, good work.

Check out a movie I made: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FlG4rq6Z_LQ I'd like your opinions. I wrote it and play The Frenchman.

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Sexy.. I liked it
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Here's one a few friend's of mine made last year for film class. (The asian dude, Sun, makes the movie awesome).

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RmluTGdCZTo
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That was really really good.
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krypto1339: I can't say I cared too much for "The Good Scotsman." It didn't seem to have a plot; it was a collection of scenes that didn't really relate to each other. Individually they had potential, but they didn't mesh all that well. It started out about the bullies, then there was the love interest, then there was the short kid, then there was The Good, The Bad, and the Ugly, then there was Bond. I think if one event were to cause the next, it would have been much better.
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Very naiice. I liked the camer work.
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I liked it a lot. Good reversal at the end. There was a bit too much lens flare, especially when walking down the street in the beginning. And some of the backlighting made it hard to see faces, especially the last scene. But other than that, good work.

Check out a movie I made: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FlG4rq6Z_LQ I'd like your opinions. I wrote it and play The Frenchman.


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#25
Yeah good little vid, nice selection of shots, they worked fluidly with each other. As someone already mentioned the shadows of the camera man really ruin the continuity, once at the start, and then in the final scene by the car he can be seen again against the guys jacket. That has to be sorted. Nice story.
Perhaps the flashbacks could have been to higher standard, I mean seeing the rings on the pad and all, just a plain white background would have made it far better. Still those are the bad points, it was a good vid.
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I liked it a lot. Good reversal at the end. There was a bit too much lens flare, especially when walking down the street in the beginning. And some of the backlighting made it hard to see faces, especially the last scene. But other than that, good work.

Check out a movie I made: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FlG4rq6Z_LQ I'd like your opinions. I wrote it and play The Frenchman.

EDIT: And dude, I just checked your profile, and your taste in music, books, TV, and movies is flawless, save for Lord of the Rings. Bravo on liking the good stuff. If only you had listed Firefly/Serenity, you'd be perfect.


I remember watching the Frenchman a while back when you posted it. I liked it a lot. I love how suddenly it ends.
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Good camera work.


+1

That was one of my favorite parts.


And I swear, Kyle could be a movie bad guy. That "death stare" (as I call it) looks kinda freaky, dude. If I met that guy, and he was just giving me that stare, and saying nothing, I would piss my pants.



Great movie, though. I loved it.
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