#1
this song is wicked serious and stuff.

I'm at the edge of a cliff
And I'm about to lose my grip
Will you be there
When I slip?

I've showed signs of it before
When I lied there on the bathroom floor
The drugs kept me high
While she kept me low

Will you be there when I slip?

That ****ing bitch tore through me
She left me naked for the world to see
She looked at me with lying eyes
And told me we were happy

Will you be there when I slip?

I slip and fall and I don't care
Tears stream down my face
And my heart begins to tear

Will you be there when I slip?

Look at me, I crave attention
I seek friends and social redemption
I wear my hair in my face
because I say society's given me no place

Will you be there when I slip?

My dad says pain makes a man
but my scars are drawn on with crayon
Depression's my game
xoxmisspetewentzxox's my name

Will you be there when I slip?

Will you sew my tights when they rip?
When I die, I want to go peacefully like my Grandfather did, in his sleep -- not screaming, like the passengers in his car.
Last edited by RockOut2TheMoon at Nov 23, 2007,
#2
I like the pete wentz reference. And rhyming isn't as cliche as most. Good work.

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#3
THat pete wentz reference is just spectacular, hahahaaha good job man, I love it, not too cliché like most songs of this topic

c4c mine? brooding or windowpane