#1
I had been thinking about past relationships and what people have done to destroy them, and things people will do to hurt you or get want they want. This is my second piece for the week, hope you enjoy it.

My sould is yearning for you,
My eyes are opened toward you,
My hand is out clenched for you,
and yet....

I...
I wanna fly away from here...
I wanna escape all this fear....
And I....
Am yearning to hear.

This world can twist and shape you,
mold and miscreate you.
It can take the one I love,
and crush the little love!

I....
I wanna fly away from here...
I wanna escape from fear...
And I....
Am yearning to fear...

It never will change,
it happens all the same.
You open up and let it rip,
They close you down and unhinge it!

I...
I wanna kill...
I...
Wanna kill this fear,
And I wanna fly from here...
I wanna escape this fear.

I....
I wanna fly away from here...
I wanna escape from fear...
And I....
Am yearning to fear...
#2
Pretty damn good; is it a fast or a slow song? I enjoy the way you keep contemplating the ideas in the song...it reminds me of my other one, Brooding; if you look at that you'll see similarities probably. overall, good job man

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#3
I usually hate songs like this; but this is pretty good. Clearly raw emotion, I like it.
When I die, I want to go peacefully like my Grandfather did, in his sleep -- not screaming, like the passengers in his car.
#4
Thanks too both of you. Yeah its a slow song but at certain parts it gets a little more yelly. I dunno wahat happened, but I put my heart into this one. Thanks guys.