This was really good! Some good pop punk stuff going on. I don't really have much criticism about it. I really like the slow intro and then how it kicks in. Seems like a really fun song to play. Good job.
Intro was pretty cool. I love what you did with the first verse, the back and forth thing. The attempted chorus sounded pretty good, the only thing I have to say about it is that measure 72 sounded off to me. It just didnt sit right with me, but maybe thats what you were going for. Well actually now that I've listened to it again, I like it now. It creates that tension and then resolves it. Bridge was cool, I liked how it built back up into the chorus. Overall good job, I liked it. Crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=720465