Poll: Which deserves 1st place?
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View poll results: Which deserves 1st place?
Red
6 46%
Blue
7 54%
Voters: 13.
#1
---To Rip an Angel’s Wings---

It’s an impulse I can’t seem to control
For our skins are just too smooth
A sick obsession with my dark perversion
A quick injection with this blood transfusion

I’m afraid I’m just an instinctive animal
With natural insatiable needs
I am master of this tantalizing art
That you would forbid from me

And to pluck these wings
As fine as they are
And to rip these wings
Beloved they are
And to pluck these wings
Unripe as they are

To ease the misgivings
I bestow upon you the two of things
An angel who sings
And this creature to rip its wings



---undone---

we’re not playing pretend anymore,
this is real life.
we can’t change who we are just by
closing our eyes.

unevolving is easier than
growing with time,
walking backwards will offer
no unwanted surprise.
I’ve unquit my old habits,
I’m taking a drag.
and I’m laid down to bed by
unlovable hands.

you unwrap me like candy,
undo me then ask
if this means I’m unleaving,
and have I come back.
always unconfrontational,
I just walk away,
and I leave you undone
by words I can’t unsay.
#2
I almost voted for the wrong one accidentally. The top and bottom selections of the poll are flipped with the colours in the work.
Meadows
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#3
Quote by SomeoneYouKnew
I almost voted for the wrong one accidentally. The top and bottom selections of the poll are flipped with the colours in the work.



thanks for pointing that out. it saved me from voting for the wrong one.

#6
red is really thought-provoking. reminds me of a dylan lyric. a bit more development and that's an extremely well written lyric.