#1
i figured the only way i could get anyones attention was to give this a title like that haha
but if anyone does have any title suggestions those would be well appreciated


Got all these thoughts in my head
But not a thing to think about
My mind knows that I’ve seen you
But my eyes don’t recall
I’m sure we’ve crossed paths before
Before I learned how to crawl

(Bridge)
This would all be a lot easier
If you would let me in
but even if you did
It wouldn’t matter anyway

(Chorus)
I hope you’ve had your fun
I thought you’d want to know
Everything said is said
Everything done is done
There’s no turning back (anymore)
There’s no “us” anymore

I can see the stars in the daytime
I can hear the things we never said
And I can hear the ones we did
There really isn’t much difference between the two
I just can’t remember which one said “I love you”

(Bridge)
This would all be a lot easier
If you would let me in
But even if you did
It wouldn’t matter anyway

(Chorus)
I hope you’ve had your fun
I thought you’d want to know
Everything said is said
Everything done is done
There’s no turning back (anymore)
There’s no “us” anymore

Tell me everything will be alright
But this time look me in the eye
I can hear the things we never said
And I can hear the ones we did
There really isn’t much difference between the two
I just can’t remember which one said “I love you”
Last edited by bluesybilly at Dec 2, 2007,
#2
I can see the stars in the daytime
I can hear the things we never said
And I can hear the ones we did
There really isn’t much difference between the two

I just can’t remember which one said “I love you”


very nice!
the last line need a bit of rephrasing but otherwise quite awesome
reminds me of the Arrogant S.O.Bs lyrics 'I lost count,
how many I Love You's were said but never true.'
the only real crit here is that i feel like the bridge seems a little fluffy to me. 'but i have a feeling' sounds weak.

c 4 c if you wouldnt mind:
city, 2am
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=611287
a subtle apology
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=11705613&posted=1#post11705613