#2
come on the Flaw! Hopefully be able to play this in like 10 years......

EDIT: btw Webb, ur article sucked
#3
It's far too repetitive! The riffs were rather good, I thought, but the drumming need to be more varied... I got completely fed up of hearing the blast beats... the 3rd riff, at around 1:38 sounds much better the second time around, once that over-used snare gets put where it belongs. The final outro chords sound ok, but I really think a fade or transition into them would do the song a lot more justice. Overall, you should repeat the riffs less, abuse the blast beats less, add proper transitions between riffs and perhaps insert a solo at some point... perhaps make the chords passage at the end cycle a few times and solo something more melodic... just to change the pace.

Anyway, this is pretty quite good stuff in my book, keep at it!

Best of luck!

...could you check out my bands songs? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=721078
#4
Quote by EvilWeevil
come on the Flaw! Hopefully be able to play this in like 10 years......

EDIT: btw Webb, ur article sucked


...article?


Cheers for the crit, Leo, a lot of my songs end up incredibly repetitive, mostly because I can't be bothered to write out transitions and the like. Cheers though, I'll check your songs out.