#1
I gave you yours
and you gave me mine
This broken heart
This valentine

So when the sun goes dim
and the moon has faded
The stars wont shine
Cuz' they're broke and jaded

And Let's just pretend
That this is the end
And Let's just be friends
Cuz' this is the end
(repeat 2x)
(breakdown)
We can't be friends
If this is the end
and I won't pretend
If this is the end
(repeat 2x)

Yeah I gave you yours
And you gave me mine
You're broken heart's
My Valentine.
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#2
Very clichéd. That makes it quite a bit less enjoyable, for me at least.

But, generally good, effective phrasing, even in spite of that.