#1
So decided to start writing for my bands up coming ep. and this is the first song we are gonna do. Its slighty unfinished but hopefully get it all up tonight.

Tell me what ya think so far anyway! And thats the tone we are actually using on the Ep (Guitar and bass mix critique would also help)

http://media.putfile.com/casual-red-44


(p.s take no notice of the drums. Just a guidelise for myself )
Last edited by False_God at Dec 6, 2007,
#2
wow very cool. sounds really professional. a lil to much fuzz on the bass, but thats the only problem i see. o and needs vocals and a lil bit more to the song, like a solo or bridge. but so far it sounds really good. keep it up

could u crit mine
http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=727896
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#5
Very queens of the stone age ish and very awesome.

Nice!!!

Get some vocals in there.
#6
Quote by NeptuneUK
Stoner?
Well im stoned off my tits and lovin' this!!
Dude


The bass aint to fuzzy for me!

Haha!

Nice man!

Thanks for the crit! Makes me happy!


Quote by Radio Addict
Very queens of the stone age ish and very awesome.

Nice!!!

Get some vocals in there.

Thanks man! Yeah, you would never guess their my biggest influence!

:Cheers:
Cheers guys!
#7
Yeah definately QOTSA or Kyuss, nice riffing

you could do a quieter breakdown type thing with vocals and then explode into that sweet riff