I made this riff up recently and wanted to get someone else opinion. i was scerwing around with it for a while and it turn into a kind of acoustic/metal song. It not actually done but i just want someone else adivce on if it crap or ok or watever, it all in guitar pro 5.2 with RSE but i also put a gutiar pro 4 version as well. and yeah i also crit anyone that crits mine.
started well but the main riff is so generic it ruins the song, then to further sink the song, you just repeat variations of that riff. scrap it and keep the intro and put some thought into the rest.