#1
I have had a sentence in my head for a long time. Now i have converted it into a phew phrases, tell me if you think it has any potential at all. And yes, it is a silly lovesong

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And i, I wanna look at the sky
I wanna feel the breeze on my wings
And i want to fly up so high like a bird

And i, i don't know why
That i want you to be my breeze
To lift me up into heaven from the earth

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#2
ehh. to me its okay. but it has potential but i dont see anything wrong
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