well, I don't really have time to give you an extensive crit but I wanted to give you something since no one else has.

but I loved this song. it was kinda videogame-esque while keeping a steady rock feel and some technoish stuff was goin on at the same time. nothing I can really tell you to improve on. the key change sounded sweet and all the lead stuff was just so cool.
...Nothing you've ever...
...Planned on ever turned out...
...The way you planned...

...You're still disappointing them...
Nice one!

i love how the keyboard and the second guitar combine each other
well and the lead its just esplendid
Guitar: Ibanez Stagestar 98'
Amp: Laney HCM30R HardCore Max 40w
Effects: P - KORG AX5G (Tone Works)

Kinda Noobie Stuff
I liked it although bars 70-81 were a bit repetitive and I thought you could have used a few more chords (different ones) and possibly have had a speedier solo as it seemed to fit the song. I enjoyed it however..also I think perhaps it could have done with more of a climax and possibly some more phase-shifting however I enjoyed it on the whole. C4C my sig pls.