I like those intro effects you had going there, really sets the mood for the rest of the song. Reverb sounds quite nice as well. I think the intro drags on a little too long though. Actually as i listen to the rest of the song, it all sounds a bit repetitive. The drums are excellent, though. Overall i'd say about 6/10 Crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=732666
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I think the intro really sets the mood for the song which is cool. Everything works fine in the progress of the song but i kinda miss a climax thing, it gets a little boring at the end. Overall i would say 8/10.

Crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=733868
My guitar gear:
Epiphone G-400
Kasuga Les Paul Custom (Broken nut)
Marshall Silver Jubilee 2553 head
Marshall Silver Jubilee 2x12 cab

My bass gear:
Gibson SG EB-3 1963
Dynacord Eminent II
Marshall 4x10 cab

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