#1
ok here is the thing, i was watching the movie Constantine with keanu reeves and i thought that it would be a good idea to write a song about it so here it is:

Dressed to kill in a coat of black
Straight from heaven to hell and back

He’s supernatural thriller from underground
Sent by the angels to steal the devil’s crown

He’s got white wings and a long red tail
A fiery trident and skin so pale

Dressed to kill in a coat of black
Straight from heaven to hell and back
That’s right

Pointy ears and balls of steel
Just looking’ at him’ll make you squeal

The spear of destiny was sent from hell
What it’s used for he won’t tell

He walks downtown and everything dies
The devil couldn’t kill him, no surprise
Dressed to kill in a coat of black
Straight from heaven to hell and back
That’s right

(so please crit away!)
#2

He walks downtown and everything dies
The devil couldn’t kill him, no surprise
Dressed to kill in a coat of black
Straight from heaven to hell and back
That’s rightQUOTE]

I like the whole thing except the first line of the last verse, sorry I just think it's out of place, "He walks downtown with a fire in his eyes" would be my personal suggestion.....then I think it would kick ass....you gotta play it as a rock song though!!!....


Please crit mine if you get a chance- https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=733349


Cheers,


Dan
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