#3
some notes in the lead part were out of tune. the A in measure 13 (10th fret b string) is clashing with the F# Major. (It's adding a minor 3rd. ouch). some other notes in that solo part too. be sure to check that. also, in the lead part in measures 10 and 22 you have a Bb (3 fret g string) clashing with the D Major. (sharp 5. ouch again). but fix those and itll sound pretty good.
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