I just started writing, and I'd like to know what you guys think of my work so..

I was only half way
When hail started to fall
A storm breaking trough
I began to crawl

I was only half way
When a flame caught my soul
Then slowly realized
I was losing control

I am losing control
Losing my fire
And my whole life's
About to expire
Straight to the point
If it was only there
I could go search for it
But got too much to fear

I could hang on
To the stuff I know
But not taking that risc
Too much ways to go

I could hang on
To what's on my heart
But I'm losing control
And am falling al apart

My heart, my soul
Represents my selfcontrol
Now I'm broken into pieces
I can't take it anymore


Losing myself...