#1
Walk around the block to discover that
Society’s bent on forcing tears
What would be the best compliment?
That someone can offer,
Nothing comes to mind.
Do you look up to or even respect me?
Scrutinizing; observing.
Form a bias opinion and shut me down.
Don’t you think it is strange?
With your permission,
I won’t mind the structure.
“fuck the suppression”
Lower your expectations;
I can only be a reflection of you.
“Don’t you trust yourself?”



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Last edited by ggmIdas at Jan 26, 2008,
#2
I like this, for some reason i can relate to this. This really rebels against the upper class of society. I like this piece, and i've got nothing to offer as far as improvements are concerned so well done.

Can you post a short review on my 'Charming Charles' in my sig thank you.
#3
thanks. i just started writing.. im turning this into a song soon
ill look at your tmr or something
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wow.. ggmIdas is so good in bed
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basically, ggmIdas can pleasure the ladies better than me.. and he could totally kick my ass
#4
You just trashed the white-collars. Way to go, man.

I like the feel to it.

I have a piece her on the front page right now, "Ring for Your Finger." You can check it out if you'd like, I'd appreciate it.
I'M IN THE FIGHT TO CURE CYSTIC FIBROSIS...MY LIFE DEPENDS ON IT!


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Well, life is like a penis.
Women make it hard.
Also, it's short but seems long when it gets hard.