#1
just uploaded a new track called "I Know Piano" to my myspace page (link below) and I need some opinions. I need to know:

- If the piano repeat in the intro before the drums kick in is to overboard and should be shortened
- Is the transition to the drums acceptable
- is the chorus alright with just the root chords and some inversions or should I make it more spectacular
- and well just your overall feeling if you like it or not.

Crit for crit, leave a link if you would. Thanks in advance.
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LEARN:
It's not always rainbows and butterflies,
It's compromise that moves us along. -- Maroon 5
#2
nicely done man, even if the structure is relatively simple, it kind of has a pachelbel feeling to it if you get my drift. And your voice kinda soundls like Jack White, something I kinda noticed. You could do a lot with that man, need more Crash Cymbals!
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