#1
So here is ther first song I ever wrote, but recorded fifth. I got bored and decided to do it, took about 5 hours to record, but I think its alright overall, will be happy to have a listen to yours too.
Mesa Lonestar Special
Traynor YCV40WR
Ibanez -Artcore AS103BM
Fender American Deluxe Strat
Analog Man ARDX20 Dual Delay
Red Witch Empress Chorus
Big Muff Pi
Boss BD-2
MXR '76 RI Dynacomp
Fulltone Clyde Deluxe Wah
Jetter Jetdrive
EHX POG
#2
it's catchy man ... reminds me of the movie desperado for some reason, in a good way. Good structure for the song too, something I noticed. Got a little repetative, but not enought to distract me. Guitar is good, and I think you got a good voice, I'd like to see you get out of the "box" in the song, but it was good overall.

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=771807 ... mine if you want to take a look at my newest that would be grand
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LEARN:
It's not always rainbows and butterflies,
It's compromise that moves us along. -- Maroon 5
#3
thanks for the crit man, I know what you mean about the box thing, something i really focus on live, thanks again for the crit and ill have a look at yours.
Mesa Lonestar Special
Traynor YCV40WR
Ibanez -Artcore AS103BM
Fender American Deluxe Strat
Analog Man ARDX20 Dual Delay
Red Witch Empress Chorus
Big Muff Pi
Boss BD-2
MXR '76 RI Dynacomp
Fulltone Clyde Deluxe Wah
Jetter Jetdrive
EHX POG
#4
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Mesa Lonestar Special
Traynor YCV40WR
Ibanez -Artcore AS103BM
Fender American Deluxe Strat
Analog Man ARDX20 Dual Delay
Red Witch Empress Chorus
Big Muff Pi
Boss BD-2
MXR '76 RI Dynacomp
Fulltone Clyde Deluxe Wah
Jetter Jetdrive
EHX POG