#3
type as i listen

awesome intro, very mellow, cool bass line

sweet tone, and sweet note choice

i love your fast licks very clean, nice job, you are pretty dang good

i like the whole jam feel to the song, pretty sweet

those chromatic (sounds like it?) type runs are pretty sweet, fit very well actually

overall cool mellow track, i woulda liked to hear more of a devloped melody but this works too :-D

crit for crit? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=771990
dude, what about an actual solo in death metal instead of that poof from linkin park. Think of Pulse of the Maggots - Bed Of Razors


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#4
Really super right on ...
Great stuff.. I don't play in that style myself,, but can totally dig upon what you're doing..

By the way, the opening photo is a famous beach cove in Big Sur...
One of the studios I work in is right about this very beach ...