i like it when the singer starts
but i think you should work on an other intro...
nice work btw
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Cool song, but the timing is a bit wonky. I'm betting on that just being nerves though. It happens
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Not bad...but it sounds like every other mellow alt-rock song out there. Your lead work is nice, though. I think you should try to make the overall feel of the song (start with the drums) more dynamic.

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