#1
A more mellow, sad song.

About society not accepting you for who you are, and the way people have to mold themselves to fit in.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=791080

For those who havnt heard my stuff before:

I am 15 yrs old and been playing for 5 months. I wrote this song about 5 weeks ago, and recorded it a while ago - but I would like the opinions of people on this board.

C4C as always.

Thank you
#2
I like this. You have a good voice, and your lyrics aren't bad, if a bit cliched. Your rhythm is pretty strong for having only played five months, and your production quality is good. It kind of reminds me of Elliot Smith, but far less obnoxious. Also, copious amounts of reverb FTW.

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