Some stuff you make goes out of what sounds real.. I don't really know how to say it in english, but its called dissonans in Swedish.. if anyone know how to translate it .. please do so!
The second chord you take in your melody thing doesnt fit to the scales and the harmony behind the whole thing, and makes it sound false.. or however you want me to explain it.
Yea, thats the only thing thats bad.

Otherways it's really very great! Very relaxing.. however you could slow the solo down abit.. I think that'd sound better.

Very nice, keep it comming.