#1
well i got home today about an hour ago and sat down and started writing this song. finished it too. this is probably the fastest i've taken to write anything O_o"
Anyway, this song is very short, i think around a minute, but i think it has good feeling. please tell me what you think ^^

c4c and such.


-edit-
Alright, i fixed all the errors. sometimes i get a little lazy x.x"

and thanks for the kind words ^^
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Last edited by p!r4Te at Jan 29, 2008,
#2
its really good

reminds me a lot of classical gas at parts

i really you should add soem more instruments [im feeling some nice synth (or the string ensemble =P same diff) in the background]

overall its deff a 10/10 deal you got going there
just needs some ambiance to creat a perfect mood
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#3
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its really good

reminds me a lot of classical gas at parts

i really you should add soem more instruments [im feeling some nice synth (or the string ensemble =P same diff) in the background]

overall its deff a 10/10 deal you got going there
just needs some ambiance to creat a perfect mood



yeah, now that you mention it, i can see a violin solo kinda thing in the background. but i think synth might ruin it...unless i do it perfectly x_x but either way, it would sound wierd in powertabs (God i wish i had guitar pro)

But thanks ^^
#4
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yeah, now that you mention it, i can see a violin solo kinda thing in the background. but i think synth might ruin it...unless i do it perfectly x_x but either way, it would sound wierd in powertabs (God i wish i had guitar pro)

But thanks ^^


dude
limewire= freeprograms

get guitar pro off that

nice and easy
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#5
first off, press F11. See those errors? fix them.

This was pretty much amazing, I loved your basslines.
not much I can say but 10/10
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#6
This sounds great but there is one part in this song that sounds exactly like SOAD from the song lonely day. so listen to lonely day and take that part out of change it. Its a nice acoustic piece. The begging sounds swell and the rest fits good except that standing out SOAD part. GJ thnx for your crit, means alot
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#7
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This sounds great but there is one part in this song that sounds exactly like SOAD from the song lonely day. so listen to lonely day and take that part out of change it. Its a nice acoustic piece. The begging sounds swell and the rest fits good except that standing out SOAD part. GJ thnx for your crit, means alot



which measure o-o (?)

i never really listen to SOAD either....only like chop suey and toxicity. i'm also a bit against pirated music so i'm not really sure how this'll work out >.>"


P.S. the song i'm starting that you inspired me to make is sounding awesome xD
#8
lol cant wait to see wtf your writing lol. glad your against pirated music cause i am too. Starting from measure 22 to measure 26 sounds exactly like lonely day lol.
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#9
this is some cool stuff

Good:
-basslines
-melody
-pretty much everything

Bad:
-a tiny bit repetative
-a bit slow


you get a 9/10

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this is some cool stuff

Bad:
-a tiny bit repetative
-a bit slow


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well it's kind of supposed to be slow o_o"