#1
Crimson Frost -

I play to the rhythm of the falling snow
And once more the night comes dark and cold
A look of fury upon her face
These crimson lines we cannot trace

Battle mist hangs high
Tonight many men will die
But at what cost?
We lie upon the crimson frost

On this day we ever dream
On this day we never scream
And a bird of fire leads me slow
Through the rain and the snow

We sail upon a frozen ocean
We’ll never find our way back home
Even as the dragon roars
In rhythm with the oars
We’ll never see another ray of sun

Battle mist hangs high
Tonight many men will die
But at what cost?
We lie upon the crimson frost

I play to the rhythm of the falling snow
And once more the night comes dark and cold
A look of fury upon her face
These crimson lines we cannot trace
Raise your chalice my brother
Raise it high
To catch the fire that falls from the sky
#2
Battle mist hangs high
Tonight many men will die
But at what cost?
We lie upon the crimson frost

That is my fav part of the song, im guessing its the chorus, coz it is REALLY CATCHY, i love it, the whole song has great meaning aswell, great song.
#4
I third the notion. also this whole peice was wonderful. You really did a great job at it.
Honestly can't wait to read more of your work.

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#5
Thanks for the crits, I posted this song months ago. I'm surprised people are still commenting on it!
Raise your chalice my brother
Raise it high
To catch the fire that falls from the sky