#1
I'm gonna nail this,
twist and spit this ****,
far better than the way blair spun his ****.
Cos i ain't perfect.
I've got demons in my head that ain't come out yet.
And i hope that you know this.
Cos when it's time to act,
i'll be packing words and wit to attack these pricks,
and dicks,
who think their it.
cos in this world no ones it.
If you think your it,
then your just an egotistical prick who deserves to live with a stick up the arse as a form of social punishment,
for being so stupid,
and probably illiterate.
Yea, thats right, illiterate, look it up in the dictionary,
and while your at it turn this beat off,
cos i'm sure you lost track of me four clicks ago.
And while your doing that, get yourself a new hat,
cos that burberry cap looks crap,
and invest in a new pair of headphones, their only £2.99 at tesco's,
cos that music's blazin and it blows.
i ought to throw you off this bus before we hit cranbrook road.
so that for once,
i can have a peaceful journey home.
Last edited by 12eTa1217e17 at Jan 30, 2008,
#2
Quote by 12eTa1217e17
I'm gonna nail this,
twist and spit this ****,
far better than the way blair spun his ****.
Cos i ain't perfect.
I've got demons in my head that ain't come out yet.
And i hope that you know this.
Cos when it's time to act,
i'll be packing words and wit to attack these pricks,
and dicks,
who think their it.
cos in this world no ones it.
If you think your it,
then your just an egotistical prick who deserves to live with a stick up the arse as a form of social punishment,
for being so stupid,
and probably illiterate.
Yea, thats right, illiterate, look it up in the dictionary,
and while your at it turn this beat off,
cos i'm sure you lost track of me four clicks ago.
And while your doing that, get yourself a new hat,
cos that burberry cap looks crap,
and invest in a new pair of headphones, their only £2.99 at tesco's,
cos that music's blazin and it blows.
i ought to throw you off this bus before we hit cranbrook road.
so that for once,
i can have a peaceful journey home.


wowz, a UGer tried that exact thing a while ago


and got stabbed.

its quite good, yea. i'd tidy the middle section up a tad if i had to pick something

Get off this damn forum and play your damn guitar.
#5
Tidy the middle up and it would be alright. The flow doesnt seem very London hip hop at all though.
#6
Some lines made me cringe a little, e.g. "illiterate, look it up in the dictionary"