#1
i havent written in a long time like half a year mabye so im probly rusty as far as lyrics go but ill give it a try,
i wanted to finish of my paranoid sereis il try to find the rest and link em here if i can but here it goes part 3 r 4 r smtin or other

theres 5 ways we wrote this letter
all of them were sent back
the postman says the voices are wrong
and the stamps told a lie
to the self control i so badly lack


the room closes around me
padded walls and doors
as people pass by what used to be a man
but now seems like something else
lying on a cold hard floor

get me out of here
you evil woman
twisting my mind
and givin me the blues
i gave you all this man can


Edit: its #3 her is 1 and 2
1=https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=602097&highlight=voices+head

2=www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=613003&highlight=the+voices+in+my+head


thanks
C4C(i know mine was bad but like i said im very rusty)

re-edit:i wrote the first too when i was kibda a lil koo-koo but my paranoi setteled so this one is probly bad cus of that
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Last edited by Mr.Cuddles at Jan 30, 2008,
#2
i'm not sure about "giving me the blues". it sounds a bit cliche.

nice
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#3
ya srry bout that but i havent writen in a long time so i posted a link to 1 and 2 incase you wanna get what im talking about. thank btw
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