#1
well, i started writing this a little bit ago from random inspiration, then hit a wall. i don't feel like trial and error at the moment so i'll post it here and see if anyone would like to help. lol

c4c

*edit*
oops. lol@me.
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Last edited by p!r4Te at Jan 30, 2008,
#2
UMM

PHILE?
[FILE]

ID GIVE IT A CRIT BUT THERES NOTHING

[sry for caps]

edit:

well it deff make some good metal core kinda riffs

liked the insert riff/solo bar [XD]

good potential now take it somewhere
[and get gp, put some drums under there]
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Last edited by envoykrawkwar7 at Jan 30, 2008,
#4
Its good for what you've got so far. Im glad your starting something new. Im working on this a bit to help cause you do need a bit lol. So ill post back later with some new riffs and such hopefully to get your mind working again.

- ok i put some new riff in but please change it to your liking cause i think its ok but not good enough.
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Last edited by Jonathan Trejo at Jan 31, 2008,