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The verses are rapped and the chorus is sung


The bird of your love flew away
Left for the winter, decided not to stay
Wanted to stray, just leave and go far away
We're birds of a feather won't you come back today?
The violets are calling your name
Without you this house isn't the same
It's empty. The walls are painted with shame
It's always the same. Why do you play with my brain?

Take it all away
Shoot up with Novocain
Take away all the pain
You are the only one to blame
Your lies are always the same
So this is all I say

Take it all away

Like I said, your bird left a long time ago
But I still just want to sing this little song I wrote
It's kind of like a poem. Yeah, more like a rhyming note
Just a little letter, something to make me feel better. It goes:
I'm sick of trying and even sicker of failing
I think I'm flying when I really am flailing
And I got nothing at all to loose and everything to gain
It's like the opposite of you. Yeah, know what I'm saying?
So I just

Take it all away
Shoot up with Novocain
Take away all the pain
You are the only one to blame
Your lies are always the same
So this is all I say

Take it all away

I'm not asking you to change your ways
I just wish I could turn the clocks back, rewind the days
Replay all the good things that you used to say
And erase away all of the bad, but hey
Nobody's perfect. You just are even less so
Than most people I have come to know
It goes to show you that just because you try more
You don't always do as good as you tried for, so...

Take it all away
Shoot up with Novocain
Take away all the pain
You are the only one to blame
Your lies are always the same
So this is all I say

Take it all away

This is my first song.
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Quote by littlewhitekid
I think I'm flying when I really am flailing

i think this would flow a bit better if you changed around the words really and I. just a suggestion. nice job though.
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alright, off topic but how do i make forum posts



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