#1
She
She's a beautiful girl
But her mind's in another world
I'm begging her to come back down to Earth
And I
I'm a melancholy guy
One who needs to learn to fly
And to go and get my girl

Im Spreading my wings to fly
As she's falling from the sky
I swiftly dive off of my perch
And gently carry her back down to Earth
Only time will tell
Do we go to heaven or hell
Either one is fine
As long as I am with you

Now
Now her minds on the ground
And we're both safer now
I think that we should catch up on lost time
But I
I'm fading into the black
My hair's receding back
And now I need to be saved

She's spreading her wings to fly
As I'm falling from the sky
She swiftly dives off of her perch
And gently carries me back down to Earth
Only time will tell
Do we go to heaven or hell
Either one is fine
As long as I am with you

Brigde:
Another time another place
I think I'm dying
She puts a cool rag on my face
And lies beside me
She says, "If you die here I will too
I am committed to you
If you choose not to pull through
Let me know
And I'll fly
I'll fly with you

We're spreading our wings to fly
The clouds are now far behind
And even in my own death
She stays with my far past my last breath
Now we're going away for good
Up to a place we always knew we should
But it doesnt matter where we go
Because I'm with you

Because I'm with you

Please be really harsh with your criticizims.
This is the first draft.