Please check out my band profile on UG and listen to our song.
I know it's rough, and the production quality is terrible, but please leave a little imput.
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You're losing interest because you're simply not gay enough. Which leads me to believe you aren't cut out for metal.
hmmm that was ok. Heres the few things i noticed. First it sounds like the guitar is a little outta tune especally in the first distorted riff. Second there were a few timing issues. But what i noticed the most was that it felt like the song didnt really know where it was going at parts(if that makes any sense) It felt like some of the riffs didnt really go together. Things i liked - intro was cool with the storm sound and all , drums were decent. If you have only been playing for a year and a half then this was a pretty good go of it i would say. keep it up and post some more if you got em. oh yeah and production quality was not as bad as i though it was gonna be, ive certianly heard worse