#1
I wanted to see if I could handle writing some metal, because, it's not that bad to listen to. Um, they were both rather quick and directly on top of my head. But, my guitar and amp have been ****ing around too much, so it doesn't sound as good as previous recordings.

Listen.

In my profile.
#2
I listened to the one with the long title....its not really metal. More like punkish stuff.

Listen to more metal, and then write some more
#3
wow that stuff sucks sorry lol nothing like metal
check out parkway drive or killswitch engage, bullet for my valentine to get some ideas or some 80s metal check out Saxon !
peace
Dan
#4
Its not particularly great. I liked Nice N Easy more so than the other one. Practice more, listen to more music for influence. Its not really bad, either, its listenable, I've heard worse. Play more, practice is all the advice I can give. If you play routinely you'll notice improvement.
Does anyone know the song that goes: ba ba bah, ba ba buh, bu ba bum, ba ba bah, ba bu buh, bu bu bum, bu ba bu bu bum baam?
#5
Quote by The Spoon
I listened to the one with the long title....its not really metal. More like punkish stuff.

Listen to more metal, and then write some more


Well, I do listen to a bit of punk, so it's expected.

But with a blues amp and a not-so-metal distortion pedal, I did what I could.

I'm sorry I have failed.
#6
the one with the long title sounds like the soundtrack for a shooter videogame
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