#1
HI ALL, I AM IN NEED OF SOME HELP!
DOES THESE LYRICS MAKE ANY SENCE ?
Chance Taker

Take a chance n break free
be what u wanna be
stop dreaming
make them reality

Forget the past
let your self go
new year opens new
roads

time to take control
let loose your soul
drive through your blocked
roads

shine on
shine on
shine on
shine on

climb ur mind
scale your thoughts
open inabithion and soar
stand tall

take a chance and break free
be what u wanna be
make dreams
dont lose and
stand tall

shine on
shine on.

Thats all of it if please give me tips!
Denver
Last edited by Denver22 at Feb 1, 2008,
#3
wrongforum delete it and take it to songwriting and lyrics
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#5
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#6
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you should try asking the people in songwriting and lyrics forum


And read the rules there, please.

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