#1
Me and my friend playing this song last night, on the bridge/solo I couldn't reach the frets for it because it was my first time playing acoustic in like a year (Just got new strings heh)

And my acoustic doesn't have the fret access :P

http://youtube.com/watch?v=PqNEReq5j10
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#2
sounds pretty good to me. instead of not being able to play the solo, I think it would sound better if you just played the chords down the neck.

your vocalist is good, but I think he sounds bad because he's not really making correct vowel sounds. at least that's what it seems like.

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#3
Thank you ^. What do you mean by the correct vowel sounds? I'm no vocalist :P Do you mean like diction, as in singing more clearly? Thanks for the critique!
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#4
Decent enough.

Play with more full chords.

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