#2
Britina's:

Nice cord progression. I would have liked to hear more leads in there though. A tad flat at 3:30 with the solo, then over corrected A little sharp. solo sounded right on at around 4:00 though. Some of the licks around 4:50 sounded really tight and technical, but every onece in a while it went off key. Over all its a good song with lots of potintial. Good work.

Sin:

Nice riffige, don t know about the vox though. Good solo, with nice tone.