#1
This is another song written by my drummer that needs critiqing by UG.

Find a Way How

Give it up, you’re not worth it
Nobody cares, like you deserve it
Those are the words that make me mad
Other times, they make people sad

I’m looking into the eyes of the Innocent
Nothing like you ever experienced
You don’t what he pain is like
Why do you do it, why do you fight

How can I control what I see?
This doesn’t make sense to me

Stop lying, denying
Don’t you know people are dieing
Can’t you see, you’re not helping at all
It’s not worth it, they don’t deserve it
Why can’t you try to be better now…?
I don’t know, find a way how
Just find a way how.

I can’t control, what’s going on
It’s not my fault, what went wrong
You’re the only one that is hurting
What ever you get in life, its deserving

This life is not what I thought
Guilty kids are getting picked on
I wish I can stop it, I wish knew how
There’s gotta be a way, right now

How can I control what I see?
This doesn’t make sense to me

Stop lying, denying
Don’t you know people are dieing
Can’t you see, you’re not helping at all
It’s not worth it, they don’t deserve it
Why can’t you try to be better now…?
I don’t know, find a way how
Just find a way how.

How can this be happening now
I feel so, so ungrateful
Something has to be done
right now…..

Stop lying, denying
Don’t you know people are dieing
Can’t you see, you’re not helping at all
It’s not worth it, they don’t deserve it
Why can’t you try to be better now…?
I don’t know, find a way how
Just find a way how. (x2)
Bands I've Seen:
Ozzy Osbourne
Rob Zombie
In This Moment
Age of Daze
Blue October
Inward Eye
Thornley
Billy Talent
Rise Against
Rancid
Anvil
Theory of a Deadman
Shinedown
Pop Evil
Blink 182
All-American Rejects
Fallout Boy
#2
can someone plz critique this
Bands I've Seen:
Ozzy Osbourne
Rob Zombie
In This Moment
Age of Daze
Blue October
Inward Eye
Thornley
Billy Talent
Rise Against
Rancid
Anvil
Theory of a Deadman
Shinedown
Pop Evil
Blink 182
All-American Rejects
Fallout Boy