It's pretty good. I liked the bass, but in some parts i just don't think it went with the guitar (or visa-versa)
A lead over the top of some parts would make it less.... repetetive? too

yeah dude this was ok for beginners cause it was a bunch of powerchords and the bass was pretty easy to remember. But try taking it further by adding some lead. cause right now it has the rhythm guitar and the bass witch is good. but it has no real melody. So maybe add another guitar thats picking the notes not using powerchords. Or speed it up a bit since its nice and slow. But its nothing to get excited about. Ill post back when its updated. thnx
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