not bad. i dont recall the original very well so i cant really grade you well on how well you did at playing it like it is, but it was pretty good. the biggest two things i can say are this:

1)turn it up! if your gonna be recording, you gotta get some air moving! if you were doing mics, ill cut you a little slack, but if you were DI theres not much to say about it. if your ears dont hurt your doing it wrong!

2)your voice tended to be kinda sharp on attack when you were singing the chorus. KINda LIke PUTting THe FIrst FEw LETTers In CAps. it just was kinda sharp and then dropped off after.

besides that i didnt hear to much wrong. everything sounded pretty tight.

you can crit either song in my sig.