#1
Rain is lashing upon
the gleaming wet panes,
droplets collide and run
down the sleek perfected surface,
they'll coalesce and progress.
Out of the puddles formed
water seeps into the
ground or runs atop clear,
the perfect course is not clear
but the sodden ground will bear
and give.

The ground will give.

04/01/08 mw
#2
Quote by bowl of oranges
Rain is lashing upon
the gleaming wet panes,
droplets collide and run
down the sleek perfected surface,
they'll coalesce and progress.
Out of the puddles formed
water seeps into the
ground or runs atop clear,
the perfect course is not clear
but the sodden ground will bear
and give.

The ground will give.

04/01/08 mw

Wow, that is absolutly amazing, great job.