#1
Just wanted to share


Living Again


I think I've learned
To break and burn
All the things, that make me be
The person I never would
And to think that time
Will show that I'm
Finally breaking through

Just once
Tell me the way it feels
To know
How it is to be alive
And let
This heart
Become well again
Become well again...

And learning to justify
How I destroyed all of my
Doubts and feelings, hopeless meanings
And forgetting the past
A key to the present
But not without the love
Of how it once was

Just once
Tell me the way it feels
To know
How it is to be alive
And let
This heart
Become well again
Become well again...

Explaining away
All of those days
That I can't forget
Take me away
From this place
And take away my regret

Just once
Tell me the way it feels
To know
How it is to be alive
And let
This heart

(breakdown of sorts, lots of variously distributed and proportioned musicality and so-forth)

Become well again
Become well again...
Become well again...
Become well again...
Become well again...


Wrote a song for my band 'Palindrome'

I have the speech patterns, guitar parts, and drumming all in my head, so it's basically a finished song...just gotta actually do it now

We have a female vocalist, a guitarist, and a drummer...we hope to innovate with just us 3

And possibly have our singer be a bassist in the future.


Feedback is welcome
:]
Last edited by FrankTheDrummer at Feb 5, 2008,
#3
Hi.

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