#1
Here's a song i just finished, kind of in the vein of porcupine tree/other prog acts. need criticism, need help on ending.
Attachments:
song34.zip
#3
I really liked that dude. A lot. I think you're defenitely one of the better musicians on here..... plus I just really, really like your style. My only real thing to crit on the song was the acoustic lick at the begging. It was kind of boring with that C playing over and over again. Maybe you could appreggiate the riff a little bit more?

But holy **** man, that piece was prbrably the best I've ever heard on this site.

You can crit one of mine if you want.... preferably the bottom one in my sig.
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#4
I liked it, even though it really wasn't my style, cannot deny that you have talent. The piano stuff reminded me of Coldplay. I think there was also a part in the intro where it sounded out of key. But it was awesome.

Crit mine if u want: http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=12771159#post12771159
#5
That was really good.
It sounded really good and ambient up until 84... Then the drums kicked in, and honestly they sounded sort of horrible. lol

I really liked 100-112. I think it sounded better without distortion.

And I don't say this much (read: ever), but if getting hit in the nuts felt good, the solo and post-solo parts were like getting kicked in the nuts really freaking hard. Three times.

Not sure what to do at the end though. Hope you finish it though. =)
#6
i absolutely LOVE!! the solo such genius! that really made the song!

could u by any chance make a solo for my song which u said needed a solo cos i find ur solos absolute amazing!
if u can make it for "time for change" where the corrent solo type thing is i would by so thankful if u did and if u do post it in the post where u talked about my bands songs "beyond the shadow"
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=895359

thanks again and i lvoe the song!
#7
I really liked it and it definitely does sound like Porcupine Tree.

I'll be the odd guy out for a second and say that I really didn't like the solo. You've got this great piece of music to put a really expressive an memorable solo over, and instead you're shredding arpeggios. There's a time and a place, and that just didn't feel like it. Maybe if you built into it instead of going full bore out of the gate, I don't know.

It's not a bad solo on it's own, cool ideas, the harmonizing was a nice touch, but it's just not memorable and it just didn't fit the context of the song.
#8
THIEF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you stool your intro form Ensiferum's "Threachrous Gods" you should cuz it is plagerism.
#10
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THIEF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you stool your intro form Ensiferum's "Threachrous Gods" you should cuz it is plagerism.

Haha just cause it sounds like it doesn't mean he stole it.
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