I really liked it, although the chord sequence was slighty predictable.
Overall: beautiful, but it needs a bit of a melody line (guitar, piano, didgeridoo etc.). Not a guitar solo, just a melody. But cool!
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the beginning sounded jus a little fake to me but the rest is nice.
and did you use an acou for it cuz it just sounded like an acoustisizer
I thought it sounded pretty cool too. Like the guy before me said, I think it needs a melody part or something because it gets a little to boring, but it sounded pretty good otherwise.
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