#1
[Verse I]
It is getting late
But I don’t wanna sleep anymore
Don’t know what to do
But that has always been my problem
Not being able to make the most of a moment in time
I'm too concerned with what the future holds
…I am such a fool…

[Verse II]
I’ve said them again
Those words that nobody wanted to hear
Luckily this time
It’s just me repeating them to myself
In my head where I can keep them from hurting somebody else
Where this crazy likes to keep me awake
…A helpless cause…

[Chorus]
I lie awake
I'm so wound tight
I’d like to clear
My head of these thoughts
I'm wide awake
About to ignite
I would like
To shut myself off

[Verse III]
This is the only way
I can get this torment off my chest
This is just for
Every night that I’ve ever not slept
Every time my mind’s been plagued with thoughts I can’t put to rest
For every bloodshot eye to ever see daylight

[Chorus II]
I lie awake
I'm so wound tight
I’d like to clear
My head of these thoughts
I'm wide awake
About to ignite
I would like
To shut myself off
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Feel free to ask if you want to know what some bits mean, though i think its mostly clear

If you think you've seen this posted before, you have, my old one got closed. Apparently the rules have changed since i last posted in this section...
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#2

[Verse I]
It is getting late
But I don’t wanna sleep anymore
Don’t know what to do
But that has always been my problem
Not being able to make the most of a moment in time
I'm too concerned with what the future holds
…I am such a fool…
^^An okay beginning, could be made more interesting and catchy, though. I'm not too fond of the third line, they just sound like lines to take up space and rhythm. I also done like your using "but" twice, it just sounds bad.

[Verse II]
I’ve said them again
Those words that nobody wanted to hear
Luckily this time
It’s just me repeating them to myself
In my head where I can keep them from hurting somebody else
Where this crazy likes to keep me awake
…A helpless cause…
^^Much better.

[Chorus]
I lie awake
I'm so wound tight <I think that this would sound and flow better if it was "wound so tight".

I’d like to clear
My head of these thoughts
^These two lines really don't do it for me.

I'm wide awake
About to ignite
I would like
To shut myself off

[Verse III]
This is the only way
I can get this torment off my chest
This is just for
Every night that I’ve ever not slept
Every time my mind’s been plagued with thoughts I can’t put to rest
For every bloodshot eye to ever see daylight
Good n_n

[Chorus II]
I lie awake
I'm so wound tight
I’d like to clear
My head of these thoughts
I'm wide awake
About to ignite
I would like
To shut myself off


Sounds good except for just a few parts :] Nice flow and rhyme and whatnot. Good work.

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